Mmm!!!
By Zach Jones
Aged 5
Room 19
Today we had something.
It was very pink and yummy.
It smelt like strawberry.
It felt very bouncy and it tasted like jelly.
It was a marsh mellow, very rubbery and quite
delicious.
The Silly Bee
By Esmee Hearfield
Aged 5
Rm 19
There was a silly bee, who
flew into room 19. It could not find a way out. A small girl came in and saw
the bee and she let the bee out.
It found a gully of flowers. They were pink
and purple, orange, red and other colours of the rainbow as well.
Oh no! He got stuck in a
purple flower. He found a door inside the flower. He went through the door. It
locked behind him. He tried to open it but he couldn’t open it. He found heaps
of doors. At the last door he saw a hole in the leaf but there were spider webs
and there were spiders on it. He got stuck in the cobweb. The spiders were
helpful. They had claws. They cut the webs and the bee flew out of the flower.
He said “I’m free I’m free.” The bee flew home.
What wonderful writing! I liked the 'wow' words you included to make your stories really interesting!!! Miss Sattler
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